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Wednesday, November 20, 2013
Für mein Sherrie, mein Dora ************************************************************ I could not have written this Surrealistic poem to anyone but you, but you still may not like it much. Dora Maar may not have wanted to have her portrait done as a Cubist, Guernica-infused Weeping Woman, but she loved the guy, you know?
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************************************************************ There is a chocolate fondue fountain into which lovers could dip marshmallows, black- berries, or lovers, understanding that love, perfect undipped love can be metaphysical, should be; I will have it surreal, and love you as I am now, as I wish to perceive you, mindful, body-full, and full. It’s potent and paradoxical, like dreams of wizards or flying fish or looking at a sunrise in our windshield and not talking about fire. Only with you can I see these things with such clarity that they blind us and fill us with understanding.
I will blaze unchocolated through your world, through you into mine and together, remembering a time unreal and true, long ago and never, when we would see fish in the clouds, I would become your wizard forever and we’d walk past the unvisited section of the ancient bookstore, past an unopened copy of Liebe ist ein Hund von der Hölle and remark with pure pleasure that had he lived, Freud could have read Bukowski.
By Ben Cassel ************************************************************ Every year for our anniversary, Valentine's Day, birthday, etc., my husband and I write poems for each other. This one was written in 2011, and since it's the 8th anniversary of our first date, and he's right smack dab in the middle of performance night of his high school play, I wanted to share this poem that, to me, said, "I know you."
Sorry, Poets, I don't know why this won't single space?? I tried...I'll keep trying so it doesn't take up so much space.
ReplyDeleteLovely - you are a lucky woman, and he is a lucky man.
ReplyDeleteHi Sherri, thanks for sharing Ben's poem and please, pass on my kudos to him. As mentioned, together, you are each lucky!
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